Garden Update:

We’ve had a long summer, an incredibly mild fall (seemed like summer-lite), but of course, pleasantness rarely lasts forever. We’ve had our eyes on the weather since mid-October, when we usually get a first hard frost. Not this year, kiddies. Finally, it looked like last week was the week.

I think of gardening in long range terms. You have to when you’re my age. A lot of unexpectedness can pop up and ruin short term plans. So I have been preparing my houseplants for their return to the interior of the house. This prep includes trimming leaves and branches, treating the soil and leaves for bugs, and preparing room inside the house for the “jungle’s” return.

I have a LOT of large houseplants. Most of them are angel trumpets (native to NorCal). I started growing angel trumpets in Michigan because I was told they don’t grow there. (During the summer, yes. Outside. But they can’t withstand freezing temperatures.) The growing conditions in Colorado are even more severe. There’s too much light, not enough oxygen, and humidity doesn’t exist here. Also, we deal with wide swings in temperatures. Nighttime lows could be in the 20s and the next day’s highs in the 60’s. A lot of people can’t tolerate it, although as with everything, you can survive quite nicely on proper planning.

I am also growing a lot of plumeria (best grown in Florida or Hawaii). I have a couple that are more than 10 years old (yes, I dragged them here from Michigan, where they began their lives), and a few that are going on year 2. The two older plants are taller than I am. Even in this harsh weather, I’ve gotten one to bloom a couple of times. Here! In Colorado. That tells you something about my persistence.

It seems like a lot of work for plants that don’t belong here, are difficult to maintain, and in the case of one plumeria, the trunk of the plant has been eaten by a squirrel or similar critter. It is. But it’s a labor of love.

Last week, I pulled up all the tomatoes, after picking the biggest green ones. They’ll eventually turn red and I won’t have to buy any at the grocery store. We have a fairly small yard, but the vegetable garden takes up about 1/3 of it, and you can grow a lot of produce if you plan it right. Those of you that have followed me as the Urban Guerilla Gardener know that you can plant edibles anyplace (and I do). I ended up with more large pumpkins than I wanted, just enough pie pumpkins for Thanksgiving and Christmas, way, way, WAY too many acorn squash, lots of potatoes, onions, and chard. Unfortunately, something ate the tops of my cabbages off (raccoons?) so there’s no sauerkraut in our immediate future. But life has been good, and the garden has been plentiful. I’ve been canning and canning, but thankfully, I’m finished now.

The end of it.

To put the icing on the cake, it snowed last night, the official turn of the season. It’s all over now.

And so with the turn of the seasons, it might be time to turn to back to the creative. It’s just too cold outside to do anything else.

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Too much is happening around here these days, making editing a real salty one! Amazingly, summer has dragged on a lot longer than it should have. It’s now October 21, and we have yet to have a hard frost. That means my vegetable garden is still in production mode. I guess I could deconstruct it now, but then I’d miss out on fresh veggies, some of which actually enjoy the cooler temperatures, like lettuce and spinach and chard. There seems to be no end to this mild weather, at least that’s what my phone tells me. It’s unreliable, yes, but I need it.

Finally, we are moving forward on getting the roof repaired (hopefully before the first snow). A huge tree bounced off it May 5 during a night of wind gusts into 96 mph. I didn’t write about it, too busy in the aftermath. This isn’t the first time a tree fell on our house, and unless the neighbors remove the last one standing, it won’t be the last time. Fighting with the insurance company is no fun. I don’t get the reluctance to pay off; we pay premiums, a monster tree fell on our house. We have photographic and video evidence that it’s not in our imaginations.

The tree after my husband sawed off the smaller stuff.

Actually, we filed a claim for roof damage on our rental house (different insurance) – much later, mind you, in August – and ta-da! as of Friday, we have a new roof on that house! What a difference a company makes!

(Side note: Nationwide is NOT on your side.)

So now that Real Life complications have finally settled down (somewhat), I’m able to go back to the manuscript. Unfortunately, after taking a two week break, I’ve got to start at the beginning.

This is where taking copious handwritten notes are a good idea. After reading the handwritten notes (doesn’t take much time), I can get back to the work a lot easier.

I can’t remember when I started writing reference notes. It might have been when I was re-writing Finding Cadence, and the first time it was to get the timeline straight. That story takes place between February and October. I find that using a monthly calendar (with space for each day) and inserting it into my notebook to write notes works well for me. I’ve done it with each story I’ve written, whether it takes place in a week, or 30 days, or longer. I log which characters have a major scene, page numbers, on specific days.

The notebook also records each character’s personality traits. You might not want the reader to absorb all of that information in the finished book, but it’s important for the author to know their characters inside and out. (I want to insert here that writing isn’t just about writing. A lot of major thought has to be put into what exactly you’re going to do, and how you’re going to achieve your goals.)

I also clip photos to insert in my notebook, draw maps, draw house layouts, etc. I suppose I could use Pinterest. I have a Pinterest page and have used it for writing before, but at this stage I’m all about having a tactile reference that is not connected to the Internet.

Oh yes, I’m a pantser. I couldn’t outline my story before writing it, no way! I could maybe come up with a vague outline once the first draft is written. However, it does help to have some idea of what you’re doing, and taking notes, whether you do it with pen and ink (or pencil) or on your computer is a must!

So far, on the current edit (the story takes place during seven days), I’ve completed Days 1-3. A quick read, and I’ll be able to start on Day 4, maybe by this afternoon.

Happy reading, writing, and editing to you!

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I didn’t do a lot of editing last week.

Too many things going on. One, winter could rear her angry head at any time. It’s already nearly the middle of October and we haven’t had a first frost yet. This is unprecedented and weird. Temperatures have been in the 70s and 80s with an occasional 90 degree day, and there hasn’t been rain in over two months. (Not that it “rains” here, just ask my husband.) I’ve been picking tomatoes and the zucchini has been so prolific, I’m running out of people to pawn them off on. Luckily (maybe), the weather people (who are more wrong than right) are claiming that Thursday is the magic day for a first freeze. Maybe. They change their minds daily.

October 13, 2024 This angel thinks it’s summer.

So I really haven’t cleaned up the garden (too soon) and my houseplants are still outside soaking up the waning sunlight, although I’ve been trimming, cleaning, and debugging them. Take my word for it, you do not want dirty pots and insect infestation to follow you indoors for six months or more! I’ve been positioning them for a quick return to the warmth of the house, which entails rearranging the house. (How I wish I had a greenhouse!) Once they’re in the house, you can’t really move them around. They’re HUGE. I can only drag them around twice a year. Once to put them inside in fall, once to take them out in spring.

(Why do we do this? I don’t know. We’ve always done this. Insert *shrug* here.)

We also found out that the work on repairing our roof will begin as soon as the contractor gets our fancy-schmancy Decra tiles. FINALLY. Maybe before the snow flies? It was May 5 when that huge tree bounced off our roof (and was removed, and then the fighting with insurance began). The commencement of this work is all too close to winter for my liking, but c’est la vie.

Then I offered to beta read a manuscript. Written by someone I went to high school with, it was interesting and held my attention. It was also a memoir, and it was also very long, but I persevered. I liked it.

This was the second manuscript I offered to read this year, that was a memoir written by someone who attended my high school. I guess I’m feeling generous. Widefield High School – rah, rah, rah.

I don’t often read non-fiction, not even for fun. Maybe my past choices have something to do with it. Like all good writing, no matter what the genre, the story must be engaging, and told with skill and panache. It must make you want to turn the page. Most of the memoir I’ve attempted to read is pretty dry. I can’t think of the titles; they’re relegated to the Goodwill pile as soon as I give up.

I don’t know how I can help this up-and-coming writer. I know very little about writing non-fiction (I’ve tried it, it’s just not in my wheelhouse), and I definitely know NOTHING about memoir. I wouldn’t even attempt writing memoir, mostly because my life is just not that interesting. It’s infinitely more fun (for me) to write fiction.

However, this story was an easy read, the story grabs you. Maybe someday you’ll find this book at your local book seller.

I’ll spend the rest of the day trying to come up with a constructive critique. Which means I won’t be editing my own work until I’ve finished.

Oh, well…

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The Reedsy Questionnaire is actually five interviews in one, so this resource is really worth looking up! Following is just the first of the five:

Our actions and decisions are informed by our past experiences. Take a trip down memory lane to explore your character’s backstory in more depth and help you create more believable, relatable characters.

  1. What is your earliest memory?
  2. What is a memory that makes you swell with pride?
  3. What is your worst memory?
  4. Where did you grow up? What was your childhood like there?
  5. Did you have a childhood nickname?
  6. What was your relationship with your parents like when you were younger?
  7. Who were you closest to as a child?
  8. What did you want to be when you grew up?
  9. Did you ever get in trouble as a child?
  10. Who were your childhood best friends?
  11. Who were your childhood enemies?
  12. Did you celebrate your birthday throughout your childhood?
  13. What was your favorite day or holiday when you were a child?
  14. What was your biggest fear when you were a child?
  15. What is something you were insecure about when you were a child?
  16. What is your most embarrassing moment?
  17. What is something you quit that you now regret giving up on?
  18. What is something you wish you never learned the truth about?
  19. If you could relive one day of your life without changing anything that happened, which day would you choose?
  20. If you could relive one day of your life and change its course of events, which day would you choose?

In order to delve into character motivations, you have to know your characters. And in most novels where there’s an antagonist, a protagonist, and lots of other characters that fade in and out, it’s necessary that the distinctions between all the players is more than apparent. (I will admit, this is a very hard task for me!) While you might not use every personality trait or truth that you’ve teased out by interviewing your characters, doing these exercises in some form will solidify them in your mind, and hopefully to your readers’ minds!

Happy writing!

Make your characters more than ghostly!

 

 

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I’m still interviewing my characters, in an attempt to solidify what they look like in my mind as well as their motivations. Here’s a great questionnaire I found on the Gotham Writers web site:

Gotham Character Questionnaire

1. What is your character’s name? Does the character have a nickname?

2. What is the character’s hair color? Eye color?

3. What are your character’s distinguishing facial features?

4. Does your character have a birth mark? Where is it? What about scars or tattoos? How did he/she get them?

5. Who are your character’s friends and family? Who does she surround herself with? Who are the people your character is closest to? Who does she wish she is closer to, but isn’t? Why?

6. Where was your character born? Where has he lived since then? Where does he call home?

7. Where does your character go when he’s angry?

8. What is her biggest fear? Who has she told this to? Who would she never tell this to? Why?

9. Does he have a secret? (News flash: WE ALL HAVE SECRETS!)

10. What makes your character laugh out loud?

11. When has your character been in love? Had a broken heart?

Optional Extra Questions

12. What is in your character’s refrigerator right now? on the nightstand?

13. Describe what is on your character’s feet right now.

14. When your character thinks of her childhood kitchen, what smell does she associate with? Why does that smell so resonant with her?

15. It’s Saturday at noon. What is your character doing? Give details.

While this set of questions doesn’t really dig deep, it does fill in some holes. I know when I am in the process of beginning to write, the physical attributes of the characters I’m writing about aren’t exactly clear. It’s as though I’m looking at them without my glasses on. Then I put my glasses on, but I’m still not seeing the entirety of them, the whole of them as a person. Writing authentic characters means you have to go everywhere with them – inside and out. That’s why writing isn’t exactly an easy gig!

More next week…

California tall trees.

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I didn’t post last week, as I spent most of that time

looking for my notes on my current WIP. This was complicated by instead of compiling all of my written notes into one notebook, I used my journals for notes. Take my word for it, this is a bad idea. Entertaining to see what I was doing five, six, seven years ago, but such a time suck. From now on, I will use one notebook per manuscript. Makes life easier. Here is a photo from the Mollie Kathleen Mine in Cripple Creek, Colorado, where they’re still digging deep.

I’ve often said that I use character questionnaires in order to do a deep dive into personalities so that I’ll understand their individual quirks, hopes, dreams, and psyches. Filling out such questionnaires also helps to define how each character is different from the other (I tend to write characters as extensions of myself – very boring). Well, I found several questionnaires. This is a very famous one taken from thewritepractice.com.

Proust Questionnaire

1. What is your idea of perfect happiness?

2. What is your greatest fear?

3. What is the trait you most deplore in yourself?

4. What is the trait you most deplore in others?

5. Which living person do you most admire?

6. What is your greatest extravagance?

7. What is your current state of mind?

8. What do you consider the most overrated virtue?

9. On what occasion do you lie?

10. What do you most dislike about your appearance?

11. Which living person do you most despise?

12. What quality do you most like in a man?

13. What quality do you most like in a woman?

14. Which words or phrases do you most overuse?

15. What or who is the greatest love of your life?

16. When and where were you happiest?

17. Which talent would you most like to have?

18. If you could change one thing about yourself, what would it be?

19. What do you consider your greatest achievement?

20. If you were to die and come back as a person or thing, what would it be?

21. Where would you most like to live?

22. What is your most treasured possession?

23. What do you regard as the lowest depth of misery?

24. What is/was your favorite occupation?

25. What is your most marked characteristic?

26. What do you most value in your friends?

27. Who are your favorite writers?

28. Who is your hero of fiction?

29. Which historical figure do you most identify with?

30. Who are your heroes in real life?

31. What are your favorite names?

32. What is it that you most dislike?

33. What is your greatest regret?

34. How would you like to die?

35. What is your motto?

More to come next week…

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Gratuitous pear tart photo. Mmm, that was delish!

I’ve participated in NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month, in November, for you newbies) for many, many years. In fact, all but two of my novel ideas were born in November. That means eight out of ten. *good grief!*

I’ve learned that during NaNo, you don’t want to write quality. You don’t want to think. You just want to get 50,000 words down in thirty days. That means getting the bare bones of your idea down as fast as you can. In my case, sometimes I write scenes, sometimes just dialogue, sometimes a whole chapter. It doesn’t matter during November, as the goal is to cross the finish line. Verbal diarrhea and some stream of consciousness wandering is to be expected. There’s always time to ponder and correct and more clearly flesh out your ideas on December 1.

My current edit, from a NaNo completion in 2017, is really a doozy. The story is solid, but now I’m into developing the characters, all of whom on December 1, 2017 were pretty wooden and one dimensional.

Character development takes some introspection on the part of the writer. The more layered and nuanced the character, the more he/she will seem real to the reader.

These particular characters (four main ones) are adult siblings. Their father has just died. The relationships are all strained for one reason or another. While they shared the same parents, each one reacted to their upbringing differently. As with all siblings in the real world, they are not the same.

I’m not ashamed to say that during my long life, I have been in therapy a few times. Largely successful therapy, since now I look at myself and others differently. I can see where hurts, both real and perceived, can cause someone to act/react in a specific way.  I understand crazy, from the temporary illogical nuttiness to the lingering and truly batshit. I try to incorporate some of what I learned in counseling with regard to developing my characters. This is done in layers, like that old saw says, peeling away at an onion.

In cases like this, I find that answering questions for each character (regarding personality traits, motivations, etc.) to be most helpful. I’ve used these same set of questions for other novels. And yes, I use a separate notebook (yes, a physical paper notebook, with a pencil) for the novel and answer the questions for each character.

This exercise takes time to complete. Luckily for me, when I write using the computer during NaNo, I also have a notebook at my side, so a lot of my research is done while writing like a fiend.

Now, before I really get into the bones of editing, I take this information and my questionnaires and get into the heads of these people. This does take some time, especially if the characters are damaged. And these are.

I’m not going to complain how the rest of my life has taken over my time. Time is something I delegate, so it’s all my choice. But rest assured, I’m working on it.

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